Episode 32: Fire, Bad!
Episode 33, Escape Artist
Color, Digital
Art/Story: Jeff Lee
Editor: Mike McMenemy
Script
Panel 1
Closeup on Fiann.
Fiann: Heat Metal? How–
Panel 2
Close up on Benk, laughing, and holding his holy symbol in his hands.
Fiann: We took your holy symbol–
Benk: HAHAHAHA.
Panel 3
Close up on the buckles of the dinosaur saddle, smoke starting to form.
Benk: “Took my holy symbol–” –I worship Charon, the god of Death and Judgement.
SFX: SSZZZZZZ
Panel 4
Fiann struggles to hold on as her allosaurus slams into the cage-cart.
Benk: My god is everywhere.
SFX: SSZZZZZZ
Panel 5
The wheels of the cart slide towards the edge of the cliff.
Benk: No one escapes judgement.
SFX: scrunchhh
Panel 5
The allosaurus roars in pain and confusion. Fiann looks worried as she tries to hold on
Fiann: No! Stay calm, Girl!
SFX: SSZZZZZZ
SFX: RRROOOOAAAARRRRRR
Creator’s Corner
While the holidays delayed this page, This page went through several revisions. The original rough was only three panels. So the first thing I did was rough out more of the scene to slow the pacing and build tension.
I also redrew several of the fine details on this page. The smoking buckles, flame, and glowing holy symbol were some of the last revisions. I’m happy with the final result. I hope you are too!
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